Talk:Lucilla Greonio/@comment-26362067-20161006233147

Next member!

Appearance... Not much to say here. Though, why is it that people wear cloaks/capes every time they travel?! Seriously, I've seen that a hundred times. Books, anime, games... I could go on. Not telling you to get rid of it, I'm just saying it's common.

Personality... Nice. Not really what I expected from the picture. I like that. Discrepancy between picture and personality actually fits, too, with your note that Luce looks kind/nice at first glance. Very good, indeed. Though, really, leaving that side of her unexplained is a little lazy. Like, is one of her parents like that? Children tend to act like their parents, after all. Or did it happen because of some event in her childhood? Also, by saying "bark", you make me think she's a bit loud and outspoken (as in verbally abusive) and then you go on to talk about her liking of combat. Think you might have meant "bite", there. Anyway, going on...

Once again, not much to her abilities. I'm certainly interested in finding out how she wields that huge sword, though. You could actually have her Semblance be something that helps her wield it, like how Ruby's Semblance helps her wield Crescent Rose.

Though, going back to history... Again, no section for it. Really suggest you put one in. Otherwise... not much else to say, other than I'm interested in seeing how she turns out. Which means I'm done here. On to the next OC!