Talk:Aithne Mikazuchi/@comment-26362067-20161006235235

Ooh, much more here! :D

Not much to comment on in appearance. It works, it's not restrictive... yeah. Honestly, I have nothing to say here, other than good job. Same for personality - typical defiant, reckless OC. Kinda reminds me of OC Jade, actually. ... I'm kinda interested in seeing how a meeting between Aithne and Kaili would go, now. Anyway... Again, no history, but you've explained that by this point.

Now... abilities and weapon... First things first: Explain the Semblance. Details, limits... Side effect, if you want (like how Yang's eyes turn red after a certain point). See you used my suggestion for the weapon. :) Otherwise... Honestly, I don't see whip users moving around too much... Their whip tends to do their movement for them. Which wouldn't exactly give her much time to develop speed, unless it has something to do with her history.   CQC, I understand, however. (For the record, I wouldn't take this as fact - I know pretty much zero about weaponry, so this is really just my conclusions from fictional stuff, and it may or may not be true) I'm also interested in seeing what you'll name the whip, though.

And, surprisingly, that's it. Really not much else for me to say here, despite the more extensive info. Can't wait to see them finished! :D