Talk:Violetta Merriwether/@comment-26362067-20161006230530

So, you asked for a review... and here it is:

Honestly, being a visual person, trying to see how violet and dark-blue would go together is hard. Might wanna find a sample of each color and hold 'em up to each other - see if they clash or not. Also, diadem? I've never heard the word. In fact, I actually thought you meant diamond there, for a moment, till I saw the amethyst part. Perhaps leave an external link to a wikipedia page for the item? That's what I did when I made Tsubaki's weapon a nodachi.

As for personality... not much to comment on here. Typical shy person with natural leadership skills. And an obsession with cleaning... for some reason, I get the feeling that's going to become the base of many comedic moments... Just try not to overdo it. There's a point where it gets annoying, and people start going "you've already done this a hundred fuckin' times, for God's sake!", etc, etc.

Unfortunately, without details of her weapon or Semblance, there's not much to comment on in terms of power levels. I'm quite looking forward to seeing what you'll give her, though.

Also, I don't see a history section. Oughta put one in - even if you want it to be revealed through the story, you should at least update it when you reveal it in the story. You know, kinda like canon wikis do.

And... that's about it for Violetta. Now, onto the next member...